I am
Explores ways to find the joy in life
Loving individual to all things living
Entertaining ball of positivity and laughter that lights up the room
Naturally a goofy person
Always dancing and creating new choreography
I am a kind hearted dreamer
I wonder if the world will change for the better or fall down a deeper hole of war
I hear the dying laughter of children’s imaginations
I see the light of others fade from their eyes
I want to bring the colourful spark back into everyone in the world so they can live
I touch the hearts of others to show them happiness
I say that if we start now to stop the losses of childhood, happiness, and imagination their could be a future worth seeing
I dream of a world without violence and replaced with smiles
I try to spread the cheer I have to as many people as I can
I hope to make the world a better place
I am a kind hearted dreamer
Hello I am Elena,
I am a girl who see life through the eyes of a child with wonder and awe. I believe that everyone has a spark in them that generates their kind of happiness and represents their true self. So, for this blog I hope to have posts that will cheer people up and make you feel like a kid again. The theme that I want to create for this blog is one that is filled with bright colours to symbolize happiness (hence why I named this blog Happily Happy). It will also be filled with pictures that brought joy to people when they were children, so that while you read you can be sent back to a life that was simple and your imagination was wild. As this blog grows I hope that my posts and atmosphere create a feeling of child-like wonder that has been missing from within you, or strengthens the one you have already. I hope to leave people with a smile on their face and a warm feeling within themselves.
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Dear Elena,
I love your whole blog theme and I think you perfectly captured yourself with the bright colours and with this page. You really are so happy and bubbly and it definitely shows in your writing.
One thing I would change is the length. I would love to see you dig deeper into who you are and your story. What you have right now is already great, but I think it needs more of the you we can’t see in front of us.
I’m really looking forward to your writing and will be sure to come back and watch your blog grow!
Love,
Kayla 🙂
Dear Kayla,
I appreciate your kind words and thoughts of my piece. The feedback you provided is insightful and made me recognize what I can do to make this piece, and future pieces better. Thank you for taking your time to read and comment on my blog.
Love,
Elena
Dear Elena,
I loved the idea at the beginning of your about me when you took each letter of your first name and turned it into something about you and who you represent. The idea of child like wonder really inspires me to go towards that direction because just like you I am a complete child inside waiting to come out.
I would work on the actual part about you before you explained your blog I would hope to see it a little longer so I can know who you are outside of your blog and not just what you want your blog to be about.
Your writing is captivating to read because I can relate to a lot of the stuff that your writing about.
Love,
Felicity
Dear Felicity,
I am so happy to see that you are inspired to live a life with the idea of child-like wander. Your feedback is great to hear because I was just focusing on the concept of what I want my blog to be, instead of what I want the readers to know about me. I will take in consideration of your feedback for the future. Thank you for taking the time to comment and read my piece.
Love,
Elena
Dear Elena,
I really enjoyed reading your about me page. I really like how your ultimate goal with this blog is to bring a smile on the face of others. I also love the idea of not forgetting and almost re-living your childhood. I definitely learned a lot about you through your about me page. I love how you choose to be optimistic and make other people happy.
One thing I would work on is the length of your about me because I would definitely love to learn more about you.
I look forward to reading more posts on this blog because I definitely did enjoy reading this page and I also love the overall theme and ideas encompassing this blog.
Sincerely,
Wajeeha
Dear Wajeeha,
I am glad that you learned something about me and that you enjoyed the optimistic feel of this blog. Your feedback that you provided is really helpful because, I thought that this was long enough and gave the reader lots of information about me. I will try my hardest to make my pieces detailed enough that the readers know what I’m trying to lay down. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my About Me.
Love,
Elena
Dear Elena,
This was a wonderful About Me and I really felt that I got to know you a little bit more through it. I knew you pretty well before this class and your words within this piece really solidified who you are. Very well done! Your optimism is inspiring and the ideals of your dreams are hopeful and really match your blogs aesthetics.
In the section of feedback, however, the very beginning of your post confused me a bit. The beginning ‘I Am’ feels out of place and I personally feel that it would be more consistent and clear if you began with the poem built out of your name before the first ‘I Am’. Also I would just like to see it a little bit longer and maybe some more punctuation but that is about it for my critiques.
This was very well done Elena; I hope to read more soon.
Sincerely,
Emily
Dear Emily,
Thank you for your kind words and finding my piece inspiring, that is what I want to accomplish from this blog. The feedback you gave is really helpful and insightful for I did not think of making this longer and that the beginning could sound out of place. Thank you once again for taking your time to comment and read my work and I will keep in mind of your feedback in the future.
Love,
Elena
Dear Elena,
This about me is so joyful and pleasant, which I love! I really like how you started off with the use of your name as an acronym to describe the type of person you are and I thought it was a very clever way to introduce yourself. The line, “I say that if we start now to stop the losses of childhood, happiness, and imagination their could be a future worth seeing.”- I thought that was very inspiring and insightful, it definitely stuck with me.
One think you may want to consider is expanding upon your figurative piece, and just go more in depth, and add more length to what describes you.
Overall, well done! I love the idea of integrating that childlike feeling of liveliness into your posts. It’s very unique and wonderful. For that reason, I look forward to reading more posts by you.
Sincerely,
Simran
Dear Simran,
I am glad that you enjoyed my About Me and were able to take something away from it. I will surely take your feedback into consideration for when I have to write something in more detail so the readers have a greater understanding. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a comment on my blog.
Love,
Elena